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Saturday, 3 December 2011

Teenage love !

Welcome to the teenage years of your life. The year when everything around you seems beautiful, the sky looks brighter, the flowers seems more prettier than before. Butterflies keeps on fluttering on your stomach and how just to talk to that special one, you sacrifice your sleep.
Nopes, you are not the only one who goes through all this!



You see him,adore him but afraid to go up and say Hi,
fearing of rejection, too shy and scared to try.

Still, you try your luck and it din't disappoint you,
with a beaming smile, his eyes were sparkling like dew.

Promise to stay in contact, you both wave,
this memory you would forever in your heart save.

You keep on waiting for his text to arrive,
assuming he is your life.

Days passed  months and years,
you have become one of his dears.
You know all his secrets and he knows yours,
to take care of him as become your chores.

He promised he won't forget you,
and no one else can replace you.

That you have become his addiction,
without even knowing what is dedication.

One fine day-his ego became so dominant,
your soul was tormented.

All the promises were just a plain lie,
you kept on weeping and cry.

He left you and you were now all alone,
thinking to yourself, whether if he was really him or just a clone ?

There is a difference between addiction and love,
This is called teenage love.



P.s: This is my first attempt on poetry, I am not a good poet. Infact, this is my first ever written poem in my whole life! This came up to me automatically. All teenage love do not have the same conclusion. But what I have seen with my friends in these teenage years, I have showed through this poem. Not all guys are the same, and you are one lucky girl if you have got your prince charming :)

P.P.s Nothing personal in this poem either, as I told you, it was just spontaneous, came up in my mind just like that. I am still 16 and yet, i haven't fallen in love yet! ;)


44 comments:

  1. its too good to be someone's 1st attempt! Wonderful....well-written

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  2. @Jidhu: Glad you liked my attempt :)

    @Adi: Thank you for boosting up my confidence :D

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  3. you just wrote down what i always deny (: really love it. it's really good.

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  4. Well done!

    Teenage love is a very important part of us growing up!
    Glad to see you write!
    :)
    Keep that going!

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  5. @Jessica: Thanks a lot! :)

    @Priyanka di: Thank you :)

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  6. I went through this phase during my 10th board exams. :D Beautifully written :D

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  7. Instead of writing a poem about it you should probably just talk about it. Readers would proably much rather hear you experience about a real boy than peoms about a non existant boys

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  8. @The Narcissist: Happy to see someone who could relate to it :)

    @Rachael: This is a real life experience,as I said above I have seen most of my friends going through the same situation.

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  9. we are all imperfect & will never be perfect..

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  10. ^^
    I agree but we need to recognize what are mistakes are and improve on them.

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  11. Well Done! Well-written! Teenage love is a part of growing up and everybody goes through it. I went through it , although my didn't end of like your poem. I'm 42 now and i'm still with my girlfriend from grade 10. We have been with each other from a very long time. Now we both are married and have two kids, One boy and One girl. Teenage love is a very important part of life because you discover what you are looking for. Best of Luck for the future. <3.

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  12. Like everyone has said WOW what an amazing poem especially for your first! Id love to see more poetry on your blog, you're just too good!

    ps if you get the chance please check my blog out! I blog about teenage issues, humour, beauty, fashion, life, music, advice, anne much more!
    www.wadduprachel.blogger.com

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  13. @Shahzad: Wow! That is soo cool! You are among the lucky ones who found their only "one" so early. :)
    Thank you :)

    @Rachel: Thank you :)

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  14. Great first effort. You certainly got the feeling and the experience of young love across.

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  15. I haven't felt so strong about a poem in a long while.
    It was beautifully written and I can relate to this.. I'm also in my teens and haven't had any relationship experience yet, but I found this painted such a good picture of teenage love :)

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  16. Nice first attemp! Keep going..

    Cheers.

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  17. @np: Maybe :P
    Thank you :)

    @Teacup-pineapple: Thanks a lot! Feels good to know! :)

    @Richard: Thanks! Cheers :D

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  18. You wrote this?!
    Cool...!!

    kepp it up!
    I definitely looking forward for ur next poem!! XD

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  19. @Razil: Haha :D
    For sure ;)
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    and thanks :)

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  20. Excellent first attempt.

    My first attempt at poem was as lame as a dog talking to man....It's still there to remind me...

    And what can I say about love... less the said is better o:)

    PS - This is one of the rare moments when a guy is jealous :p

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  21. I would love to read that poem nikhil! ;)

    Hahaha :D
    You are surprisingly sweet :P
    Thanks! :)

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  22. Lovely, keep writing more and more!

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  23. Your poem is okay. But check this out:
    oh youth! Oh beauty!

    Youth & beauty are 2 close friends that cannot be parted.

    As beautiful as the flowers of the morning they are.

    But just as beauty lies superficial so does folly lie in their heart.

    For they make so many mistakes & commit so many sins.

    They retainneth not the advice of the wise in their heart.

    They make love but yet are not married.

    They get pregnant & they kill their young because they are unwanted.

    They insult their fathers forgetting that they would be fathers someday.

    They curse their mothers forgetting that it is she who brought them to life.

    Oh! How i wish the beauty of the youth could be complete with wisdom.

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  24. Your poem is okay. But check this out:
    oh youth! Oh beauty!

    Youth & beauty are 2 close friends that cannot be parted.

    As beautiful as the flowers of the morning they are.

    But just as beauty lies superficial so does folly lie in their heart.

    For they make so many mistakes & commit so many sins.

    They retainneth not the advice of the wise in their heart.

    They make love but yet are not married.

    They get pregnant & they kill their young because they are unwanted.

    They insult their fathers forgetting that they would be fathers someday.

    They curse their mothers forgetting that it is she who brought them to life.

    Oh! How i wish the beauty of the youth could be complete with wisdom.

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  25. The poem is there on my blog! Do check it out..
    It's called Bark to Heart : Dog to Man...

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  26. Ah, to be in the throes of deep crushes:) You make me reminisce of a time when love was uncomplicated and fun:)

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  27. @Saru: Thanks a lot! :)

    @WISDOM: wow! standing ovation for that poem! ;)

    @Nikhil: would check it out for sure

    @PeeVee: Glad to take you to the happy good old days ;)

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  28. Love the poem and what it represents , as teenagers we no doubt go through the "stages of love" so cheers on writing about that :)

    as for the poem it self i write poems myself been so for a while and i would say try to expand your vocabulary with words and of course it doesn't have to rhyme just make it come straight from your heart :)

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  29. Looveee it!!! Gotta love young love! Lol!

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  30. @Farah: Thanks for your valuable comment :)

    @Natalie: Thankyouu :D

    @arepchepha: :)

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  31. i love your poem, its really good. please read my blog, because no one reads it and you have so many people reading yours,

    http://www.kimberly-heart.blogspot.com/

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